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chickoo007
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0 posted 2011-08-29 04:58 AM



I often look with hope filled eyes,
At your face ....
And I find you looking,
At someplace else ....
Is it that ,
I expect too much ?...
Or is it that ,
You give too less ?...

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-08-29 07:22 AM


Quite the dilemma! Sadly, this is a rather common experience, I fear.

Good thought well expressed.

It's a matter of coming to terms with the doubt and then take decisions.

M

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-08-29 11:04 AM


Hah! I've sadly been in that situation.

~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~

ebonygirl
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3 posted 2011-08-29 10:05 PM


Been there too.
Ms. E

chickoo007
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4 posted 2011-08-30 11:55 AM


@ M --> hmmm ... its coming to terms that seems to be the most painful .. its like my mind knows what is happening but my heart refuses to accept it ....
chickoo007
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5 posted 2011-08-30 11:56 AM


@ jerry & E --> Should I say same pinch with a or  same pinch with  a ?
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6 posted 2011-08-31 09:23 PM


Been there, done that... When you have to ask, you know the answer. *S*
JL
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7 posted 2011-08-31 09:26 PM


"I expect too much ?..."

This line really jumped off the blue page...

Nice one.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Haf_Alive
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8 posted 2011-09-04 03:09 PM


sounds like a good old fashioned compromise is in order.
i don't know how many times this train of thought has run through the tracks of my mind o__O

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