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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 More *** To cross the river of indifference I will swim right into awareness where all the whirling stops and the heart wins over the mind. Where perceptions flow free like crystal clear waterfalls, bringing the gift of lucidity revealing the perfect reality. There is more to life than what meets the eye ... To touch the very essence in which all life is rooted I’ll call upon the great silence and upon the vast void. I’ll cut all the boundaries which define my illusions. I will ban from my soul all the melancholy accumulated in endless nights of longing. There is more to life than what meets the eye ... I know for I have caught a glimpse of those portals to eternity while I explored ethereal routes on iridescent wings of butterfly. Like ripe red apples glowing on a tree the stars twinkle on the firmament inviting me to decode their mystery. I transcend the known itineraries and in audacious determination I move into Life, I move into You. *** |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
OMG, Margherita, Moooore Please, This is where I'm at in my life, Thank you for putting it into lovely words. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You took the reader (me) down a path of emotional and physical feelings. For sometimes when you read certain phrases you get such a charge out of it, that it becomes softly physical. There were a couple like that in this beauty. ~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Like ripe red apples glowing on a tree the stars twinkle on the firmament inviting me to decode their mystery. I transcend the known itineraries and in audacious determination I move into Life, I move into You." Wow!! Nice write, love that ending. JL  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Ebonygirl, for telling me you enjoyed this, as it matches your own experience. Go go girl for the more, it calls out for you! Thank you so much, dear Jerry. It feels good to hear that you had those softly physical reactions in reading my words. That's the key test ... I am happy when I can cause a certain emotion in the reader. Dear JL, thank you so much for your loving comment. To be audacious and determined is always a great advantage in reaching our goals. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ethereal and excellent... beautiful work! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
your words really moved me, dear lady...this is really brilliant...what more can i say?? love-faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ruth and dear Faith, you both are adding to the beauty of this day with your loving comments here. Thank you so much. Love and joy. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are a breath of fresh air, and this my dear, is breathtaking. Exquisite and so beautifully penned. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lori, for your most loving comment. You know I am happy when you are here. Love, Margherita |
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