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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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Southeastern USA
0 posted 2011-08-28 01:34 AM





I'm... in... agony.
The night train's air horns I hear
on a gentle breeze.



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2011-08-28 12:03 PM

I can hear this piercing sound in the night ...

I do hope morning brought solace.

Powerful.

M
luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
2 posted 2011-08-30 03:02 PM

ah, I think we all have had nights as these, I know I have, and so I know that this is...powerfully written
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-08-31 12:27 PM

Night Train: Was that a twelve bar blues instrumental by Jimmy Forrest?
That would be a good sound for sleeping.


Enjoyed your write.


JL

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