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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Harmony If you can not dream I will dream for you. If you can not speak, I will speak for you. If you can not breath I will breath for you If you can not love I will love for you If you can not walk I will walk for you And if you run I will stand still * |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
In my humble opinion, JL, this vies with "Unconditional" for first place in displaying your deep knowledge and understanding of what makes the world go round. I am in utter awe of these 2 poems of giving. Owl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oh wow... I'm speechless... Thank you SA for being so sweet!  JL  [This message has been edited by JL (08-27-2011 07:45 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Here I can really see the perfect balance of Yin & Yang, beautifully expressed, dear JL. Compenetration of the hearts, as it should be. Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Margherita, Thank you so much. I do appreciate your reviews and responses. JL |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good Read... j |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing, world needs more people who can do this. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, you can't do everything for them after doing that much...and running away is never really an option that turns out well, is it? Exceptional writing lately, JL. What muse is sitting on your shoulder, anyway? |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...And he will do so much more for us if we only open our hearts to him and give God total control...Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Just beautiful... *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ida: Thank you! ---------------- J: Glad you took the time to read. Thanks ---------------- Prasad: Thank you sir. I appreciate the reply. ---------------- Sunshine: Thank you… You are my muse, dear! ---------------- Paul: Thank you sir. ----------------- Suthern: Thank you sweet lady!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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Haf_Alive Member
since 2011-09-04
Posts 56High in the Sky |
i was curious as to how the title fit with the poem, so i googled the definition of harmony... your poem is a very human definition of this. hard to say if any other word would fit as nicely. thanks HAF |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear JL, LOvely, love in action, Beautiful. Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks HAF! Thank you Ms. E. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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