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Tanka..intimacy's call
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Tanka..intimacy's call |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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after their meal they cleared the table and washed the dishes there was a hum to preclude all but rarefied embrace ---------------- ---------------- ..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Harmony ----------------------- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just a hum, well, I think I heard the same hum somewhere. Well, too much embrace might be hard on your underpinnings. Interesting arrangement of the syllables with such meaning Spiros. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I take that hum to be an ongoing prediction to those embraces. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love this, Spiros. I can feel that bond through their togetherness in everything, because that is how well you painted it. Very special - not many have that bond, but when they do, it is particularly beautiful, though seldom noticed. You said it all - in so few words. Lovely! Owl |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I agree with Owl, this is lovely. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..>>Eric, Jerry, Owl, and Trina..>>i much appreciate your having read and your comments..i don't know, Jerry, rather than a predictor, the hum is a demand for embraces..or simply a product of the motion of love vibes moving throughout a loving couples' two bodies which actually have become one through simple vow..>>spiros --------------------------- |
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