Open Poetry #47 |
Best Thing I Ever Had |
faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
When I get to Louisiana, just a mile or more to go. Yes, when I get to Louisiana, just a mile or more to go, Lord, you know i'll be alright once I hit that station floor. They say he's in New Orleans doing his best to survive. They say he's in New Orleans doing his best to survive. I'll be in New Orleans just as it's turning five, That man was the best thing- yes, best thing I ever had. That man was the best thing- yes best thing I ever had. Lord knows when I see him it will make my heart feel glad. When we're pulling in the station, Lord I'll be headed for that door. Yes, when we're pulling in the station I'll be headed for that door. You know I just can't wait until I hit that station floor. That man was the best thing- yes, best thing I ever had. That man was the best thing- yes best thing I ever had. Lord knows when I see him it will make my heart feel glad. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whoa Faith let's get out some slide acoustic guitar and make this baby sing. You got the best blues format and I can see this goin down great as a parallel to a traditional. 12 bar blues this works! I can hear Sue Foley singin this or maybe even Bonnie Raite. Great work girl! Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Gosh, Eric...thank you so much. That means alot to me coming from you. I'm really honored Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I concur with Eric, except for the Bonnie Rait part, I wrote a poem about her that I'll have to post. When you get to New Orleans I'm about an hour away. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Ha! I can't wait to see that poem...and yes, JerryPat, if that's an invitation to drop in i'll be there There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
I see more of Shania Twain when I read this. Makes me wish I had a good man. LOL When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thanks so much for your lovely comments There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What about Eric on the guitar and Faith on the vocals? That's how I hear it. This is lovely, Faith. Owl |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Must be a wonderful man. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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