Open Poetry #47 |
11:59 A.M. |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sleep with one eye open and one foot upon the floor. Seven bullets for my gun--the extra is the silver one etched with my own name, insured-- for repercussion's sake, I've saved a ticket outta here--let's pray: I'll have no need for eight. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Taking it as it comes, take 'em all out before you come the the silver lining, I'm packing the eighth one. ~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Intense, serenity blaze, but understood, Ms. E |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I sure hope and pray you have no need for any of them - especially no need for the eighth, Karen. Owl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jerry, Ms. E., and my dearest Owl, I thank you much. My love to you all for reading and commenting. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As long as you write, WE can relax, I guess! (((((Karen))))) Love, Margherita |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Leave the bullet in the gun, just let the ink keep flowing from your pen Liz |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Maybe you should think about taking your meds real soon. LOL. quote: "Lets pray I'll have no need for eight" Great ending. Really enjoyed. Hope you don't take my statement about meds serriously...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like what Margherita said... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
for repercussion's sake, I've saved a ticket outta here Gotta love a gal who's prepared for whatever comes her way. *G* But you bet I'll pray... I hope the only weapon you'll ever need is your pen. *S* |
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