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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-08-24 09:04 AM


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The slow swaying
Of green leaves
Beneath a gray sky
The cool air

Tell me more
Of what I want to know

There’s someone here
Who has no need for you

Ringing
On the phone


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2011-08-25 09:11 PM


I can't say I understand your intent...I just get what I get from it, and sometimes silence is an answer that's a koan.

I like it.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2011-08-25 09:51 PM


I like this one.  Reminds me of things.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
3 posted 2011-08-25 09:52 PM


I like this one.  Reminds me of things.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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