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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-08-23 03:09 PM


I have taken this off,
because it isn't what I wanted..


~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-23-2011 08:32 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-08-23 03:31 PM


A soulful walk with you this time Jerry.
Well done.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-08-23 04:32 PM


Sometimes life just sucks and all the "positive thinking" in the world won't fix it until you ready.
                               Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-08-23 04:57 PM


Thanks Lori, Ida. Sometimes I think I need to let it alone, and for the most part I do. Sometimes, however, the devil needs His due.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
4 posted 2011-08-25 04:42 PM


Your poem is so true for me.
Loved it, it reminds me to continue to take it off it it isn't what I want or like.
Thank you JP2.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-08-25 04:46 PM


Thank YOU, Ms. E.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

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