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Open Poetry #47

Existence

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2011-08-22 09:02 PM

Sitting here,
Or if sitting over there,
Just somewhere,
I don’t care.
Before a wall or a window
In day light
Or all night,
Watching electric lights glow;
No one calls
None at all,
People are just a gray shadow,
So I stare
And watch as they come and go.

Gloom

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2011-08-23 01:55 AM

You've certainly lived up to your name here, Gloom but I still love your melancholy poetry.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-08-23 01:42 PM

Enjoyed your poem. May I suggest that you phone and invite somebody to visit you - or that you go and visit somebody instead? I truly mean well, but would also dare to suggest that you dare to give one big smile to one person today and see what happens?

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-08-25 03:58 PM

I agree with Ida,
enjoyed Prof. Gloom,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-08-25 04:41 PM

Been there. Done that. What the hell am I talking about, I'm there now. Rats! Nice gloomy work.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

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