Open Poetry #47 |
Turn Again |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
TURN AGAIN 22 August 2011 Brimful of sigh-wonder, eyes stroke the birth-colours of the morning, exploding the sparkle in the shimmer-windows into the music of virgin laughter, laughter, laughter, and like a unicorn prancing at the gates of peace, or a vixen protecting her young, or an albatross winging the wide ocean sky, the day bursts into bloom. Owl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“eyes stroke the birth-colours of the morning, exploding the sparkle in the shimmer-windows” “an albatross winging the wide ocean sky, the day bursts into bloom.” Love these lines. Very nice write - and morning story. JL |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, JL. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Brimful of sigh-wonder, That's what your poems are, dear lady! I enjoyed this very much! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am glad this was brought up again, I had read it before, but could not reply in that moment. Spectacular! Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Love the way you picture the day. Ms. E |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ruth. Again, a wonderful, heart-warming thing to say. Thank you, Margherita. I am glad too, for I always enjoy your replies immensely. Smiles. Thank you, eg. Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful and original expression of the day's birth. You are incredible too, you know that? xoxoxo A |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Alison, for your tremendous support and appreciation! Owl |
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