Open Poetry #47 |
King Balladeers' Thrones |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Some time ago in Africa where Balladeer was king He envied all the other tribes so had his subjects bring The other rulers thrones to him which he then stashed upstairs A secret known to just a few the rest, quite unawares His kingdom was impoverished his castle made of straw and as his throne collection grew in proof of Newton's law It all crashed down about his head and broke his funny bone 'cause when you live in a grass house you shoudn't be stowing thrones |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... Ah, Doc... this was just what my day needed... Thank you for the perfect smile prescription!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
oh groan! I love it, love it! Lori |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Too funny, Doc! Loved your witty endinding to a poem cleverly done! < > ° ` ¶ misc |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
suthern, Thanks gal, just puttin' my own little twist on a few of the "classics", lol. Doc Lori, Thank you, "groan" was just what I was going for, lol. Doc Miscellanea, Thanks, I'm having waaay too much fun with these things, I'm glad you find them entertaining. Doc |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Doc... you hit my funny bone! Thanks for the smiles. No really thanks, not that I'm not goofy enough as it is.... You may write for your own enjoyment, but you can pass it on to me for my edification any time. JL [This message has been edited by JL (08-26-2011 04:03 PM).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
JL, My thanks to you . PIP has been putting up with me for twelve years now, I'm not really sure why. I only know I really enjoy making people laugh, or groan, whichever. I guess that's why I'm here. Doc |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Where is Balladeer? He is letting this go unanswered. My lands. My head is spinning! Very funny, witty and creative. I love this. A |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Alison, Michael's been very busy but, I'm sure he'll get around to dealing with my foolishness' lol. Thanks. Doc |
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