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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A small grove of trees Among them three pines Two willows Moving green Still green Light green Dark green shadows In morning Cool air The greens Of this world Whisper to each other A green wind One single robin Watching Listening On the green lawn . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! Totally after my heart. Your vision conveyed the peaceful feeling of oneness with nature. M |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I love the color green, so refreshing and hopeful. Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Lovely poem Huan Yi. Write on! Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is lovely! I could see it, hear it, feel it – that profusion of all those greens - exhilarating scene, bubbling with life. I see those greens too when I look out any window of my house – I had a single robin on the balustrade of my verandah this morning. Owl |
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