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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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kBLbuP3(oRg~~_35.JPG) * When our spirits roam the sky meadows our smiles collide as soul sparks take flight and your eyes softly glide into the depth of my own. You meet me as a myriad of blades of grass dancing in the breeze each with its own pearl of dew, bowing in grace to you my sun inviting you to sip drop by drop leaving countless imprints of your tongue of flames. When you touch me like this I become a velvety pasture welcoming your warmth within my inner sanctum where love melts us into one single sea of gold. When you touch me like this I emit the fragrance of the magic cosmic flower whose name is Love and who resonates with us across the infinite space of forever. * |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. nice to see 'pure Romanticism' grace "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea! ... and, what a GRAND-FINE phrase: "magic cosmic flower whose name is Love(!)" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice! JL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well chosen romantic words...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so beautiful and softly romantic... I found myself smiling and sighing with pure pleasure as I read! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful poem and photo, Margherita! Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, dear Margherita...I love to read your poems. Hallmark needs poetry like this instead of the junk they often put in their cards. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed to everything word of this wonderful poem, Margherita. You touched on, and delved into the very fire of love's wanting and passion's giving. Great poetry. ~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Beautiful poem, wonderful read that gives such peaceful images to the mind. Fine writing, Margherita. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Margherita, your words, "Where love melts us into one single sea of gold" So beautiful, the feeling from your words. Ms. E |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
This poem takes my breath away. You have such a beautiful way with your words Margherita; they are a reflection of your equally beautiful soul. Anyone can write a poem but it takes a gift from God to be a poet and you are a poet of the highest order. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
margherita, this is deep and thoughtful, the romance is everywhere here in heart, exquisite words create a delicate universe of love, enjoyed a lot yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi margherita, an image of yours inspired me, may be i could use it for a poem, yann |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, your pen mingles generations in secret dreams |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Bruce, for your kind and generous comment and for enjoying the "cosmic flower". Thank you, dear JL, for reading and commenting so kindly. Dear James, a special thank you for always looking also past the first page  and for your loving comment.Smiling and sighing is such a sweet reaction, dear Ruth. Thank you for telling me! Thank you, dear Diana, I am glad you liked it. Dear Ford, thank you for your special comment! I don't know, maybe the typical clients of Hallmark wouldn't appreciate my words as much as you do ... Thank you so much, dear Jerry, for your loving comment, I appreciate it greatly. It's nice to hear that you felt serenity in reading this, dear Prasad. Thank you! Dear Ebonygirl, thank you for feeling those words. This pleases me. All I can say, dear Marcia, that your reply too took my breath away! Thank you, I am humbled and I blushed in reaction to your compliments. You inspire me to write on, dear Poetess. Ohhh, dear Yann, I love what you call "a delicate universe of love". Thank you for this lovely comment and yes use the image that inspires you. Looking forward to your poem! Dear D., thank you, for stopping by and commenting so kindly. I love it when my pen follows the secret dreams and maybe inspires them in others ... we are the sum of all of our years, but the heart feels at home contemporaneously at every stage of our lives. You made me think! Thank you all again. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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