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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-08-19 10:49 AM

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I’ve never
Gotten over you

Each morning
I see you there
And wonder how
It could be possible
Someone obviously
Cares for me though
I don’t know why

I have an impression
You are a guardian
Sent to protect me
In times like these
Against my lesser I

So here I am
For all my sins
Singing my little songs
For you

Just to feel you smile

.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-08-19 10:59 AM

I think this is the most beautiful, most giving love poem I have ever read.

I am glad you have her to warm your heart.

A most apt title - not because of who you are, but because of the concept of the poem.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-08-19 11:52 AM

I connect with this.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-08-19 02:14 PM

Enchanting, Kudos to you and the lady who inspired this.
Ida

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-08-19 03:44 PM

So lovely... and loving.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-08-19 06:22 PM

Beautiful feelings including humbleness, so powerfully and lovingly expressed.

M

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