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somewhere between red and green
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somewhere between red and green |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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drinking cowboy coffee, with grounds and my back to the cactus lest I dream and you return in that whispering sound when your skin touches your skin again and you let me listen to those secrets like hide and seek between the blinks you are there then turning around again looking for exits to make me wonder if you will lock us in like it is intended or try to find the doorway of forgetful I have grown accustomed to your surprises as if I have them memorized from more often when they appear in the middle of unexpected and stay just long enough to make me want to then they are gone before I say I am ready and I am left with your patience in amber ______________ daark (frickin stoplight at johnson and merlot) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How you come up with such ideas! The emotions of "in between red and green" have never been rendered more captivatingly, I say! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...they change the speeds on the stop lights here sometimes...and have traffic cams,.sooooooooooooo I can't daydream lest I get a $500 ticket. thanks lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I was picking out the cacti needles when I came upon your reason behind the poem. I must say, you are one of the most imaginative poets around...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun.... thank you babe |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"and stay just long enough to make me want to" There is a difference between want to and want you, LOL, enjoyed your poem, Ms E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...whoops...damn it, I guess I need to listen between the lines...thanks lady |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If this is what comes of being stopped at a light, let me know your route... I'll see if we can get a few more stoplights (with cameras! *G*) installed. LOL Beautiful work!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Come on over babe, you can ride along and .....well direct traffic maybe. Thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Isn't red - green that duct tape show? Now there the stuff for stop light fantasies! ali-san |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"like hide and seek between the blinks you are there then turning around again looking for exits to make me wonder if you will lock us in like it is intended or try to find the doorway of forgetful" I tend to leave doors open and am always found coming in the exit, kind of a family tradition. Really enjoyed this insightful piece that could mean so many different things to different people. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, I don't get those channels here in prison..but if you come to visit again you can tell me about it? Thanks lady ____________ ms king, thanks babe |
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