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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I remember the gyspy woman spell when she pushed whispers into mud and moved her hands through the smoke stirring it into tomorrow color shadows she said I would always be as one with stone knowing how deep the cold feels within but appreciating the sun on dawn mornings and the rains when they come in september she said I would be at the edge of heaven where only the tides touched my sides and moss would never know of my brow as it would not linger long enough to grow she said I would taste of the love trees when their scent was redwood on evening and that I would move with sand quakes into the shuddering throws of thunder and after I would be as one who is stone _____________ daark |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
she said I would always be as one with stone knowing how deep the cold feels within but appreciating the sun on dawn mornings and the rains when they come in september Time and again, I got lost in your wonderful images... but this verse is my favorite... just beautiful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suthern...thanks much lady friend...I always appreciate your glances on my whisperpen |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You are a master. I love how you shape images with your words. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks ms marilyn |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"after, one who is stone", you could also change to sand that is held in open palm. Ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E. Probably a little late to be sand. Thanks lady. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, I'm really enjoying the mysterious throw of this net over time... reminds me of Merlin...   |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun. Your net is always welcome. Thanks babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
she said I would be at the edge of heaven where only the tides touched my sides and moss would never know of my brow as it would not linger long enough to grow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm thinking I'm gonna put that on my headstone, here lies bluezy at the edge... I will be sure to give the writer credit, written in the dark, of course. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...maybe I will come and rub roses on it to keep you smiling? thanks babe |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this is some mighty fine writing !! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks so much 2ndhand |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
They do say if you look back you will turn to stone, but sometimes stone is better then being paper thin so easily torn .... The stone that never breaks .... Like a rock!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel, thank lady...stone is never too bad |
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