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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Another Is it you? I ask waiting for you to appear around the next bookshelf. Do you want to hear my song? ---Flamenco--- He strums sounds of loneliness and desire. Intently I lean in to hear if notes resonate my woman. No, it isn't you. Loved your song but... I whisper to myself I belong to another. E.M.L.-2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, shoot. Heck and Drat. The hand of love offered and rejected. Beautifully penned poetry though. ~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...we all do...but do they know it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love the atmosphere you expressed here! Potentials seem to have a favorite place to manifest around bookshelves. Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you, JP2, Dark and Margherita for your comments. Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hang on to that thought (...I belong to another) through temptation, my friend - it's what makes memories. j. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a melancholy write, Ebony...but soothing to the soul in a womanly way. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this! Wonderful line upon wonderful line and a fantastic ending. |
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