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Open Poetry #47

Desiderium (#3)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-08-11 09:31 PM

       Desiderium (#3)

There is a subtle murmur in the
   evening breeze
over high grass by moonlight,
along this lovely woodland lake,
of summer scents and transience
with hints of inexorable change
in the sylvan music of the night.
This carefree season of warmest
dreams and few regrets is waning fast
as the cricket and cicada sing a pensive
Autumn tune of all things passing.

                --- b. e. adams (8/11/2011)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2011-08-11 11:48 PM

I'm glad you decided to stay with us. I sure would miss this kind of writing.
Ida

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2011-08-12 03:10 AM

'as the cricket and cicada sing a pensive
Autumn tune of all things passing'. Beautiful lines. Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-08-15 01:55 PM

This is very, very beautiful. I can feel it with all my senses.

Owl

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-08-15 03:46 PM

Sweet, Dreampoet,
Ms. E

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