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The Shadow in Blue
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0 posted 2011-08-09 10:43 PM


Rifling through past posts
one smiles knowingly
because
in spite of sundry errors
and the occasional raised eyebrow
the poet is recognizably me.

Unquestionably.
Undoubtedly.
Me.

And I wouldn't change a thing.


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JL
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1 posted 2011-08-09 11:01 PM


Nice reflection.
Very nice poem.


JL

The Shadow in Blue
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2 posted 2011-08-09 11:04 PM


Thanks mate.
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3 posted 2011-08-10 02:06 PM


I envy you... there are some posts I'd definitely change... and some poems I fail to recognize as mine. *smile*

I really like this... bravo!

The Shadow in Blue
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4 posted 2011-08-10 07:49 PM


My philosophy is that you have to accept your past no matter how messy and foreign it seems in hindsight. It is a hard philosophy to accept sometimes, but such is life.

Thanks for the read.

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5 posted 2011-08-11 02:04 AM


I share your philosophy and put it up to just some more "stuff" that made me who I am.  I loved this.
The Shadow in Blue
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6 posted 2011-08-11 01:08 PM


Muchos Gracias mi amiga. (Now if only I could write a deeper poem, syntax wise.)
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7 posted 2011-08-11 05:12 PM


I wouldn't either.
             Ida

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8 posted 2011-08-13 05:08 AM


RIGHT ON !!
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9 posted 2011-08-13 02:21 PM


Change is not an option.
Enjoyed your poem,
ebonygirl

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