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When I saw your smile today
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When I saw your smile today |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
When I saw your smile today I was somewhat surprised the amount of time now past so many years yes, to me the memories seem new and I do apologize for that but I will not apologize for loving you… and remembering those short days and I am missing them too… me?oh, I guess being a coward is safe so I write words to you and keep them tucked in my heart… each evening before sleep can start I say a prayer for you. I thank God allowing me that time to know you, albeit a breath of time in short days… my thoughts and much more, When I saw your smile today… * |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very nicely written my friend...just exudes warmth and caring... what part of Texas?? j. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can think of so many who would appreciate receiving such a note, so many more who could have written it. Well done, JL. Thank you for sharing. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow... this sure tugs at the heart strings. Your emotion shows pure and flows elegantly. Beautiful words, my friend. Michael |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL-great romantic piece...loved it! Lori |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very touching and beautiful! *S* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dallas is where I had this exact kind of deal. Her name was Virginia. Nicely written poetry . . . ~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem, JL. ebonygirl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks J. Panhandle near Amarillo and Palo Duro Canyon. But anywhere in Texas is great…  -- Sunshine, thank you very much. -- Michael, thank you. -- Lori, thanks -- *S*, wow, you got me blushing. Thank you so very much for the sweet words.  -- JerryPat2, Virginia must be very special. Thanks. -- Ebonygirl, thank you so much. JL  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, JL. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm in line with the comments of "very nicely written, and well don's," and all the rest. This flat-out touched me. ~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~ |
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