Open Poetry #47 |
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secrets of victoria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I would always be one to admire your eyes just to keep from getting my glances noticed while making those familiar observations regarding your careful disposition of temptation there would be those special occasions too when your nonchalant would be loosened exposing some of those heavenly revelations that you prefer I don't openly speak of and then there would be those other times when your responses would be unprepared for the rigidity of my obvious reactions although unintentionally risen to attention your glances might survey those dimensions and find admiration could become detrimental so you would journey up around my mind again and spend a little more time there pretending that is was just something in my eyes you admired _____________ daark (forbidden series) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Guess you had to be there, I'm loving that look in my minds eye. Wonderful to take that journey now and then and get lost in the dream. xo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha...the eyes have it.... ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice...really liked the opening stanza in particular... j. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue thank you for wearing the grin sometimes. _______________ sweetsun your eyes are smiles lady ________________ Jwesley thanks guy. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"nonchalant ... loosened," "responses... unprepared" Liked much, Smiling, Ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...your smiles are secrets,,,,thanks ms |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could have happily gone through my day without the vision of the rigidity of your obvious reactions....but it's clever. ![]() Love the speil, stranger. I think my first experience into the realm of sensuality was with a VS gal. Too bad she wasn't there to enjoy it with me. ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Mug thanks deer, this one wears it often, kinda |
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