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Open Poetry #47

Out of love

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-08-06 09:31 PM

Through despondency,

  my terse emotional accrual disappaites.

Through anguish,

  my scarred soul reveals more tears.

Through torment,

  my physical shell crumbles from the weight.

Through disappointment,

  my mental faculties dull and whither.

Through desperation,

  I reach out with a trembling hand.

With admiration,

  you refill my empty cup.

With divinity,

  you direct me back into the light.

With devotion,

  you rebuild my crumblin frame.

With asperation,

  you resharpen what has dulled.

With determination,

  you took my hand and held on through it all.

Out of love,

  you remade me a man.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-08-06 10:43 PM

Now that is love! very well done!
Lori

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2011-08-08 03:00 PM

You give me far too much credit. I did nothing...you worked and worked until you caught what you wanted. All I did was run..then fall.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-08-08 06:16 PM

tuffluv66 you paint the love in you.
Nice poem,
ebonygirl

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

4 posted 2011-08-09 09:28 PM

My heart, you could have never run fast enough to get away from me and I'm sorry for the fall. Not.....

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