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Open Poetry #47

Jaguar E

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2011-08-05 04:30 PM

He touched my skin with no way hands
Carrying disclaimer cards
In the back pocket of my jeans
He said I was no good at wearing

As I was signing waivers
In the backseat of his 5 speed
And my intentions scowled
At the absence of some exit

My pen ran dry
As well as other places
When he pointed out all the lines
I refused to give my name

Until his eyes focused
Back on the roads fork
And weary suggestions
Had us stuck to drippy vinyl

While there was little else to do
I stole his chain smoke habit
For just a second
I let my hair fall waste length

And wrapped the scrunchy quick
Around my own uncovered thigh
Lighting up
When I saw his stick shift

-Emily Shives 8/5/11

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-08-05 06:15 PM

Interesting visual, enjoyed your poem,
ebonygirl

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

2 posted 2011-08-05 07:51 PM

I enjoyed the intents. lol

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