Open Poetry #47 |
The Teacher |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
THE TEACHER 30 October 1999 In untamed but ordered thought I, yet again, wrap my excitement for these and those and them in chosen paper and blending ribbons. Some thank their great-aunt for the handkerchiefs, some are too busy to wonder at its shape and others were expecting their first car. But if there is even one who spontaneously tears open the parcel to see if her gift can fly, the price is not too high. Owl |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Deep. Very much so. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ and understanding M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Jerry. The rewards of inspiring even just one pupil, when I was teaching, were great. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops, missed yours, Maureen. Thank you. Yes, I know you will understand. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Owl, you are right there is nothing like seeing the light come on in their eyes. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Lori, it is really something, isn't it? Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a proufound and moving poem...beautiful work! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Faith. You say such lovely things. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhh...that moment...you've captured the essence of the joy of giving so well...enjoyed |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is beautifully written. I love the way you talk about giving in this piece. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Special thoughts and kindness the answer. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are so right, Diana, and there is always that one (and sometimes more) that you remember forever. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Steaven. Yes, I suppose that would be giving – of one’s heart and soul. Thank you, Julie, for your kind words. Thank you, Eric. I love your quote . . . but I don’t think Earnest does. Yes, Ida, and I remember them with gratitude for accepting with joy, the gift I offered and flying high with it. Owl |
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