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Balladeer
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0 posted 2011-08-01 11:46 PM


Poets all, I think it's time
To put poetic thoughts to rhyme.
Show us the world seen through YOUR view
And let us learn some things of YOU.

Three times throughout the 12 years of existence of this house that Ron built, we have constructed community poems, poems from our members describing where they live or what they see when they look out their windows in the mornings. We have had quite a few new members since the last one and we invite them all (and old members who have never participated) to join in and share your surroundings with us. I have poems from the previous community poems from these members:

Ron
Nan (2)
SUnshine(2)
Craig
Lucie
Julie
Poet deVine(2)
Christopher
Wild Child
Miriam
Tara Sims
Pufalove
Denise
Caroline
Dumblond
Marge Tindal
Hope
Margherita
Mysteria
Sandgrain
Trillium
Titia Geertman
Roniece
Maggie
Marsha
Beasley
2dalimit
Bonnie J
effjayel
Nakdthoughts
Joyce Johnson
Toerag
Alison
Gentle Spirit
Earth Angel
miscellanea *
kethry
Krissy
Madame Chipmunk
Martie
Glendora
Muys
Rosepetals25
Victoria


Anyone who would like to join in may e-mail me their entries for compilation. Any poets already on the list who would like to create a new entry, let me know. If there are enough new entries, we will get 'er done!  

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (08-02-2011 02:24 PM).]

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Marilyn
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1 posted 2011-08-02 10:35 AM


You mean to make me write?!?!? *gasp* My pen has been dry a long time my friend. I will do my best to attempt something but it may take some time to get the juices flowing again.
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2 posted 2011-08-02 12:11 PM


Well, this SUnshine will provide another community poem, that's for sure!


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3 posted 2011-08-02 02:25 PM


Use it or lose it, Marilyn. Time to use it!!

SUnshine, when I think of you, U is big!!!

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4 posted 2011-08-02 11:44 PM


Hey Mike...Can I do it in prose rather then poetry? You know prose is my gift far more then poetry.
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5 posted 2011-08-03 12:24 PM


Yep. I am there.

A

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6 posted 2011-08-03 09:04 AM


Sure, marilyn....in poetic form
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7 posted 2011-08-03 07:11 PM


lol
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8 posted 2011-08-03 07:15 PM


I'm in Balladeer. Where do I submit my poem though?
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9 posted 2011-08-03 07:30 PM


Just click on my little yellow e-mail icon thingy right above these words.
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10 posted 2011-08-06 06:40 AM


Bump ...
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11 posted 2011-08-06 07:48 AM


Thanks, Ron.

Only two new ones so far, which won't make it worth the effort. Nobody out there interested in joining in?

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12 posted 2011-08-06 08:04 PM


hmmm does this mean I don't have to attempt poetry again? ohhh the people are letting me off the hook Mike...oh what shall you do?
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13 posted 2011-08-06 08:20 PM


Me? Nothing, Marilyn. Can't force people to join in. No requirements here. That's life, m'lady.
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14 posted 2011-08-06 11:07 PM


yeah

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15 posted 2011-08-07 01:40 AM


Working on it tonight, Balladeer.

A

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16 posted 2011-08-07 02:37 AM


Sent
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17 posted 2011-08-07 08:32 AM


Got it, Alison. Thank you. It wouldn't be complete without you!
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18 posted 2011-08-07 09:44 AM


sent mine Mike
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19 posted 2011-08-07 06:49 PM


I guess I am not understanding this..can't remember ever doing it before.

So do you make a book out of entries? How does this work?

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20 posted 2011-08-07 07:55 PM


Dixie, people simply write something of their hometowns, sort of like giving a small snapshot of one's surroundings. We have members from all over the world and it can be, and has been, very interesting to learn of their surroundings. The times we have done it have been enjoyable and informative. You can find what we did here..
/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=20&topic=000850

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21 posted 2011-08-08 12:30 PM


oh, okay I can't believe I didn't remember...maybe too much of the happy juice has killed some brain cells.

I guess I'll give it a shot, but sure won't be tonight. Is there a deadline?


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22 posted 2011-08-08 07:00 AM


I didn't set a deadline because I figured I'd carry it on as long as people showed interest. I doubt there will be many others, though, since I have received some entries from older members and almost  nothing from the newer ones so it will not go on much longer.

August 18th sounds like a good deadline

Prasad Nataraj
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23 posted 2011-08-08 07:45 AM


Hi Sir, just sent my entry. Thank you.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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24 posted 2011-08-08 07:51 AM


Thank YOU, Prasad!
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25 posted 2011-08-08 02:02 PM


Wait for me!!
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26 posted 2011-08-08 02:03 PM


Umm... can I write about a place where I used to live... and long to live still?  You know what they say, "Home is where the heart is."


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27 posted 2011-08-08 02:39 PM


ok...done and sent. *wiping sweat from my brow* you have no idea how hard that was for me my friend.
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28 posted 2011-08-08 10:21 PM


LOL @ your deadline... I was thinking I should participate... especially if I could write about HOME and not Houston. *G* But a birthday spanking's one thing... I don't want to actually PUNISH you on your day! LOL

On the other hand.... *bratty grin* How many whacks is it this year??? Doesn't that qualify as a beating??? LOL

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29 posted 2011-08-09 02:42 PM


well, my pen has been dry so long, I think it is beyond hope...but perhaps this pricking of my muses' consciousness will do the trick....... lets hope for the best
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30 posted 2011-08-09 03:18 PM


Oh, my...

Deer one, you lured a gem out of hiding. *S*

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31 posted 2011-08-09 07:43 PM


Michael, sure. That works for me.

Luminosity...it will be good to see you!

Suthern gal, definitely more than a spanking. A full-fledged flogging would be more like it!

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32 posted 2011-08-12 07:32 PM


Ok, time is winding down. I have new poets, old poets, departed poets and poets no longer with us. If you want to participate and are not on this list, get cracking. If you are on this list and don't wanna be, let me know or forever hold your P's&Q's.


Alison
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Bonnie J
Caroline
Christopher
Craig
Dsnyder
Dumblon
Easy1
Earth angel
Effjayel
Gentle spirit
Hoot owl
Hope
Iloveit
Enot2b
Jerry pat 2
Joyce Johnson
Julie
Kethry
Krissy
Lucie
Madame chipmunk
Maggie
Marge tindal
Margherita
Marilyn
Marsha
Martie
Miriam
Muys
Mysteria
Nakdthoughts
Nan
Poet devine
Prasad nataraj
Pufaluv
Ron
Roniece
Rosepetals25
Sandgrain
Sunshine
Southern
Tara simms
Titia
Toerag
Trillium
2dalimit
Victoria
Wildchild

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33 posted 2011-08-12 08:01 PM


What's your absolute, non-refundable, no holds barred deadline? My "part time" job is now 40 hours a week ... in four days. AND I've submitted two stories to the next quarterly magazine run. AND...I'm thinking of gearing my "adopted" community poem around where I now sit my wheels four days out of the week.

I await your reply, guy!


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34 posted 2011-08-12 08:37 PM


August 18th, miss sunshine

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35 posted 2011-08-13 02:05 AM


May I have an extension on my homework.  I have been butting my head against the wall over this allegory stuff and I am leaving town for a week.  Will be back a week from Monday.  

Please?

I know wrong thread, but I am here now.

Thank you
A

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36 posted 2011-08-13 08:32 AM


No problem, Alison. The ruler and I will be waiting for your return. Have fun!!!

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37 posted 2011-08-13 10:24 PM


August 18, hey? Hmmmmm....why does that seem to be such an auspicious date? Can't for the life think of why....

Oh well.

I'm use to working under

DEAD
LINES

  

BTW, I could not write today, as I had to wheel and deal and such...PIM has been replaced...

yep. Photos soon.

Later, Sir. Didn't mean to wake you up.

Shhh....everyone be quiet, someone is sleeping....

tippy toe....


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38 posted 2011-08-13 10:32 PM


NO sleeping allowed!

  Wake UP!


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39 posted 2011-08-14 01:20 PM


So Balladeer...you just can not help yourself when it comes to being a community organizer?




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40 posted 2011-08-14 01:43 PM


Hmmmm, maybe I will give this a try. Don't know how good it will be.
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41 posted 2011-08-14 03:14 PM


You know where community organizing can lead to, Ice Maybe I should have everybody write Acorny verse!

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42 posted 2011-08-15 01:57 PM


LOL at icebox...

Well, didja get mine, huh? Didja?




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43 posted 2011-08-15 05:11 PM


welp, I just can't seem to pull one out. Guess this will be another year gone by without me in there. Sorry.

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44 posted 2011-08-16 03:58 PM


Ummmm... *bratty grin*

Who's this Southern character? LOL

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45 posted 2011-08-18 08:22 PM


Thank you for doing this, Deer One!!!
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46 posted 2011-08-18 11:12 PM


*removed, oops sorry... deadline has passed  

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47 posted 2011-08-19 12:12 PM


Deer One,
I just sent a correction to you.
You KNEW I was going to be a pain, right? *G* (hey... I'm blonde! *G*)
SMOOCHES!

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