Open Poetry #47 |
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Talk To Me |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
C'mon and talk to me I'll take the phone to bed and you can pant pictures in my head I'll respond to you like I always do... You drive me crazy with your heat Give me that fever that sweats my sweet and sets me free C'mon baby, talk to me LGR(C)7/31/11 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This is why cell phones were invented - to protect the wired infrastructure of the country. To prevent wiring from overheating, melting. What they didn't see is the side affects of such calls ... millions are now using cell phones, particularly in Texas - all these calls (like yours) are heating the air causing record temperatures all over the state ... no, not global warming --- panting through cell phones.... Wonderful piece, my friend. Loved it. j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jimmy LOL! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, "and you can pant pictures." That says it all, my friend. ~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
loved the structure and the power of the image arthur |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Now we can skype. Maybe not Loved it, ebonygirl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, I'm so glad that read well, I was afraid everyone would think it was a typo. As always thank you for your kind words of support. ___________________________________________ Arthur, thanks for the tech support feed back...I'm pretty laid back about structure and stuff so I appreciate the comment ____________________________________________ Ebonygirl- Duh..um..skype?..lost me there lady. (remember I'm old) Glad you liked it so much Lori |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
SOunds like a verse for a rock n roll song, Joan Jett or Pat Benatar.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow... thought I slipped into the cyb0r forum for a second. Your point definately comes across, Lori. Good write. |
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