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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Fragmented pieces of misconception An illusion brought down to its knees My heart's reeling in as bait Dragging it's bloody matter along muddy waters A realization of false grandeur makes me sick I'm not as strong as I'd like to believe Who am I to become something great? My salvation is a joke for ministers to giggle at Revolting creature I see you through Don't look back at me with those love sick sadden eyes I have little pity for the damned yet you pluck at my heart strings Your tearing my aging flesh apart It kills me to see you so distraught Can't help but blame yourself for this You knew what consequences laid at the horizon Foolish being your ego won't save you here We're at the pit of annihilation The guilt must be wrenching to know your the traitor Guess this isn't anything new. How pitiful you are. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wow, Zach. You have come a long way as a poet. Your font is a bit small, but the peering was worth it. You write interesting poetry ~ and, your visuals are fantastic. Good to see you here again. Alison |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Very good poem .... deep for sure .... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Excellent write, my friend. Just excellent. j. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Alison, It's nice to be back and hear from old friends. Ah, the font is purposely small. Hard to read, I know, but I have a weird habit of not trying to take up too much space with my words. Really, this poem is just my depressive emotional vomit, but most good things aren't things that have been pondered too heavily. Thank you for the kind words.  Everyone else who commented, thank you for your kind words. I really do appreciate it. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think it is great that you use font to express your poetry the way that you do. A |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicey done! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thank A and Kat! -Zach |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Interesting, humbling. A fine job penning. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
If this is your vomit....bring on the nausea!! Enjoyed it |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thank you, Tuff and Marilyn. |
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