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Open Poetry #47
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2011-07-30 09:16 AM


Vacation pulled
out of the drive way
quarter till seven
been up since four thirty
getting things ready
to go
Each detail planned
a pain staking way
The load rides even
the bike gets dirty
but it will pull steady
in tow
Vacation left
set for the highway
I saw him  leavin'
through vision blurry
big teardrops ready
to flow
Vacation pulled
out of the drive way
quarter till seven
been down since four thirty
getting him ready
to go


LGR(C)7/30/11
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-07-30 01:11 PM

Hurtful.

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-07-30 02:48 PM

tell me
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-07-30 07:44 PM

Ouch!
  Ida
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