How Long Has This Been Going On

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Open Poetry #47

How Long Has This Been Going On

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-07-25 04:16 PM

How Long Has This Been Going On

When, did you first see me?

     first,
glimmer in your eyes
     second,
shimmering in your thighs
     third,
the fragrance of my scent
     fourth,
music to your ears
     fifth,
brushed touch against my skin

Was it the sixth sense?

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-07-25 08:52 PM

You've made me think.
Thank you for that.

Balladeer

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2 posted 2011-07-25 09:47 PM

The sixth sense always does it

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-07-25 09:54 PM

Neat. Gives the reader plenty to think about. What was it? What registered with you the first time you laid eyes on me? Uh huh. good.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-07-26 10:41 AM

perhaps it was back then
when you were looking at reflections
in the window, wondering
what I was looking at in reflections

very slick and wet ms...seductive in reverb

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-07-26 02:15 PM

Thank you Sunshine, Balladeer, JerryPat2,
and Dark for your comments and read.
Ms. ebony

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2011-07-30 09:41 PM

Enjoyed...James

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