Open Poetry #47 |
Dreamless Meanings |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A sleepless night brings thoughts unfair: wordless pictures dangling there to fuse the cons of what may be: dreamless meanings endlessly. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You make insomnia seem beautiful. I really enjoyed the flow of this. Michael |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Michael. Between the heat and the humidity, it's been hard to sleep lately... or maybe it's just age~~ M |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Sleepless nights are terrible, true writing; they do bring thoughts that are unfair. Fine write. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I fought those sleepless nights for years. Finally have survived and now can sleep. Strange through you can have in the dead of the night when your eyes are wide open. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Maureen, I like this. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think we have sleepless nights in common, Maureen. Nicely done. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed reading your poem, well done. eboygirl |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Interesting write, Maur! I thought I was the only one who couldn't sleep for all the unrestrained thoughts roaming in my head pre-sleep. Stay cool, Jeff |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Dreamless meanings, interesting, the wheels in my head are turning already working on that phrase deciphering it's meaning, very cool....good poem ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
We count the stars together, my friend, re-writing the trails they leave. I read their flow in your words . . . and finally, close my eyes... j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto! I have the cap, and T-shirt… Love the depth of simplicity. JL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't think I'd complain so much about sleepless nights if mine brought beauty like this. *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, all. Between the economy, the past, the future...the present is so overwhelming sometimes and I am just not feeling as rested as I should after supposedly a night's sleep. You are all appreciated! M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darling girl, I'm sincerely sorry that my dreams jumped several states just to land in your head. |
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