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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-07-27 08:09 AM

and there at thy western brim oh mead
where she tempts the long boats in their nodding
with the songs of her bronze sighed goddess

where metals of vikings become but shimmering
as her seething solutions silken them silent
when she steps from her altar gown of dawn

she leans down upon whiskey colored waters
and prays them into tormented waves of laughter
she bends them around her skin ends as toys

her eyes become as jade sided temptations
glancing at my mortality as it is risen
a sword without edges only intending submersion

within the sheath of her most lovely longing

___________

daark (forbidden series)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-27-2011 10:13 AM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2011-07-27 10:09 AM

Deep, heavy sigh...

and a slow smile.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-07-27 10:12 AM

Thanks sweet sun

suthern

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3 posted 2011-07-27 01:01 PM

when she steps from her altar gown of dawn

she leans down upon whiskey colored waters
and prays them into tormented waves of laughter

What a feast for the senses! I love this image!! *S*

(And your initial response to my poem? LOL I'm just glad I wasn't drinking when I read it... my monitor didn't need a bath! LOL)

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-07-27 01:18 PM

Ms suthern thanks lady, sometime an image just takes over my pen. As for the comment on your poem, it felt right at the time. Coffee or coke or milk nose could have been poetic though.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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5 posted 2011-07-27 02:20 PM

The "mistress of mead", is
goddess indeed. Nicely written.
Ms. ebony

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-07-27 02:36 PM

Ms ebony

Yes quite the stunner. Thanks ms

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-07-27 02:37 PM

Yes ms ebony, she is a stunner in ten skin

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

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8 posted 2011-07-28 01:57 PM

Have you written a book yet ??? If so where can I find one...Off to find another one,,,couldn't think of better way to spend my afternnoon then reading you!!! Just BEAUTIFUL!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-07-28 02:35 PM

Ms king

Thanks babe, you should be riding great day for it here.

Alison

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2011-07-29 12:45 PM

I read the book. I saw the movie. And then along comes another chapter and another sequel. And I am happy.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-07-29 06:39 AM

ms ali-san, thanks babe!!

arthur
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12 posted 2011-07-31 04:06 PM

I enjoyed this because it evokes a response-arthur

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2011-07-31 04:42 PM

humble thanks Arthur

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