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Open Poetry #47

Im your addict

kudanesh
Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2011-07-25 07:09 PM

Hi my name is Andrew
And I'm an addict
I have to get my fix
And my fix is you

I get the sakes when you’re away
Hallucinations come thick and fast
There’s no way I can think straight
And time slows the day

My name is Andrew
And I’m an addict
I have to get my fix
And my fix is you

Well there we have it
I’ll never give it up
Never let it go
When I see how closely our minds fit

My name is Andrew
And I’m proud to be your addict
I have got my fix
Did you get your fix to?

(Gemma this is how I really feel)

lumina
New Member

since 2011-03-21

Posts 7
california

1 posted 2011-07-25 08:30 PM

thats a really nice poem. i like the way you introduce yourself and simply say how you are and what you feel.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-25 09:57 PM

I like this. A bit different, and that is a good thing.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

kudanesh
Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

3 posted 2011-07-26 07:31 PM

Thank you for your replies. I really love this girl big time

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2011-07-31 12:26 PM

Did you give this to Gemma? I hope she feels the same way about you.

A

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-07-31 04:43 PM

Lots of feeling in this one kudanesh.
ebonygirl

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