Open Poetry #47 |
Amethyst |
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Amethyst It rained Amethyst on me today. Breezes whispered my name to say. Love, Joy, Fun coming my way. It rained Amethyst on me today. E. M. L. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That's what I call a giving rain, ebonygirl. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Pretty. It must have been February. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebony...let the predictions occur... enjoyed it ms |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, Ida, it was February. Thank you Dark and JerryPat2 for your words. Ms. ebony |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am glad that your sight was not obscured by an umbrella. If it had been, maybe you would not have written such a lovely poem. Alison |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Alison for you kind words. Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The rain is a magical whisperer when we listen deep. Very beautiful, dear Ebonygirl. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Short and sweet...thank you for the sip of sweetness.. Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very succinct, yet paints a good picture. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I LIKE this! I believe I wrote an amethyst poem once, but not as lovely as this one! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem. You are all very kind to comment, Thank you,Ms. E |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very nicely done...i enjoyed it! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Faithmariee, Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I've never had Amethyst rain on me, but if it is anything like you say it is, I am ready for it. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Loved this. |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
My favorite gem made for a gem of a poem. Lovely words ebonygirl. Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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Haf_Alive Member
since 2011-09-04
Posts 56High in the Sky |
must have been a great experience to merit a poem! thanks HAF |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Alive, It was transformational, Thank you, Ms.E |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, MsE. Well worth a second read. A |
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