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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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She was cherry lipped sweet She was built like my ol guitar She became my fan friend because.. She came to me with such honest warmth. She spoke with sultry solutions to intimacy She opened her heart and expressed her inner feelings She said she was an agnostic She said she was dyslexic She said she hadn't slept all night becuse She said she was also an insomniac.... She was so beautiful but such honest confessions painted an image in my mind.... Are you ready for this............ . . . . . All I could picture was someone that stayed up all night and wondered if there was a dog! Just me I guess....~g~ Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha! I get it Eric. Cute. Had me going there you sly dog! Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Not me. Nope. Don't know. My brain is on hiatus. Drat. Riddles. Hate 'em. Double Drat. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Nor me either, unless you were hoping there was a dog to keep her company, but that still didn't answer who she was. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and thou shall serve no other dog beside me..(Barbara Boxer) fun stuff amigo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do leave ripples of smiles behind you, don't you?  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Lori you caught it. More funny than a riddle. Words within the piece tell the story. Eric ____________________________ Jerry Thanks for dropping in to have a look at this. Nothing to it! Eric _________________________________________ Dear Diana I was trying to be funny. She's dyslexic, agnostic and an insominiac. Therefore she might have stayed up all night wondering if there was a dog, God spelled backwards.....Many thanks for dropping in and commenting. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
A smile and a giggle! ooxx Marti I do the <font color=FF6600><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Gald you exainpled this gem, beucase I neevr wloud hvae gusesed its mneiang beucase I'm aslo dlexysic  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i love it, Eric...very cleverly written...great job! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey DS glad you caught this one. Thanks for the reply. Eric _____________________________________ Yep, Sunshine one I do like to have a little fun in between the serious times.. Thanks for the read and reply. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
ha. Clever indeed. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Always fun and enjoyable to read you, Eric. M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, how could I not have seen that! Funny how we look at something and just don't see it staring us in the face. Giggles - I love this, now that you explained it. And, by the way - you weren't trying to be funny - you WERE being funny! Owl |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I... I...  ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Marti Always happy to get a smile and giggle out of someone and this time it was you. Thanks for the visit. Eric ________________________________- My my Rex whatever has happened to your thought process.....Maybe it's catching, thxan yuo fro teh rpely.....simle Eric ______________________________________ Thank you Faith for the visit and the kind comment. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Trina thanks for dropping in for a chuckle. Eric _________________________________________ Hey Maureen thank you so much for saying/writing that. Eric ___________________________________ Diana great to see you back and it's all in fun. We're all the same sometimes we can't see the forest for the trees. I appreciate your kind words. Eric ____________________________ Ha! Garapan that's cute how you see.....Thanks for the visit and teeeny meaningful reply. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very clever, Eric. ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Ida glad you could stop in and have a look at this. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL... I have to appreciate an irony in this, Eric. Some years ago, my daughter suffered a ruptured brain aneurysm and was life flighted to the trauma center at OHSU for surgery. I was staying with relatives in the city, but I didn't sleep for days. During night hours, I would sit on a loveseat near a window looking out at a frosty moon over the sleeping neighborhood. The hours seemed interminable. They had an old dog named Smokey. From the time I got there, as long as I was in the house, Smokey never left me. He would come lay his muzzle on my knee as I sat there. If I lay down, he would lie on the floor next to the bed. Dyslexia, insomnia, insanity, and a broken heart; I had them all..... and a dog. No guitars or romance in the scenario, but pure TLC. My daughter recovered. You bring back the memory of a miracle. And I think the dog was, too! Love this bit of humor! [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (01-20-2011 12:02 PM).] |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
wonderfully written... When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D |
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