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ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-07-23 05:04 PM

STORMS

The storms of life evolving

evolution

Waiting

tortuous limbo

confusion

Curiosity awakening

Welcoming light

leading peaceful

pathways to the heart

consuming

Eternally

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2011-07-23 06:31 PM

A very thoughtful, well written piece, Edna.
We do eventually find our way if we keep seaching.
Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2011-07-23 06:35 PM

Thank you Ida.
You give the best advice and I'm the best advice taker.
Ebonygirl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-07-23 07:01 PM

That, then, is the thing. Always the yearning for the light. Sometimes we capture it briefly and then it slithers out of our hands and life, and that puts us right back to yearning again. It's a vicious rat race.

After all that, you wrote beautifully.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-07-23 07:08 PM

JerryPat2,

Thank you for your comments and taking the time to read my poem.
Ebonygirl

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-07-23 09:13 PM

Ms ebony

Storms are lovely people. Enjoyed you here.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-07-24 08:39 PM

Thank you Dark,
Ms. Ebony

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2011-07-24 09:07 PM

I love riding out storms in the mountains... the rain on my face... the tumultuous thunder.

Thank you for the vivid reminder. Though peace is welcome, I still yearn for the next good storm.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2011-07-24 09:17 PM

Me Too Michael.
Thanks for your comment.
Ebonygirl

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

9 posted 2011-07-25 08:04 AM

It’s been raining every day and you write about storms very well. This one is about life though. Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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