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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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the man's appearance is unacceptable one look and you realize the man is a tower of strength physically and mentally this is a man's man I know this so why does he terrify me it's because I see him daily were 'er I go he is there staring at me with black, sinister eyes this has been going on for weeks this stalking I should confront him and be done with it but no I can't, he is much too formidable even though he hardly moves the only sign of life is his burning, penetrating, black eyes I can feel them burning into mine what does he want? I take different routes to confuse him, but it never works he is always there hidden in the shadows watching, staring the pressure on me is becoming intolerable can't stand it, must do something I prepare myself with words instead of weapons for some reason I feel he'll respond to words best I don't know, but I'm gong to find out this is it this is the day to settle things I walk up to him he doesn't move an inch still staring I point my finger in his face he growls something steps into me I awoke drenched in sweat ~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This will certainly quicken ones heartbeat. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hello Ida, and thank you for those heartbeats, they are fashionable now, you know. Just kidding around, thanks much for being here. ~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh man! Woke up? You're killin' me Jerry...I was hangin' on every word...Gotta love it too! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, Lori. Thanks for the comments. Hope your day will be fantastic today and tomorrow will be better. ~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear JerryPat2, Very cool. Confronting demonds, scary! Ebonygirl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, well, you know, Ebonygirl, that's what us SuperHeroes do, We don't like to brag. Haha! Thanks for being here, I appreciate it more than you might know. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oooh what a horrible dream. |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Hanging on every word I was anxious to see how this ended. You couldn't have done it better. Marcia |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi Oklahoma Rose, and thank you very much for stopping by even though you found yourself inside "a horrible dream." Thanks, Marcia, for your high-fives, makes me feel good, and that is a good thing, is it not? Yes, it is, I'll answer my own question. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enjoyed this, Jerry. Whilst it was a nightmare, it is one I wouldn't have minded (after the fact, LOL) having, as it was a fascinating one. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha, I heard you on "after the fact," Owl, that's the only way to play it. Thanks for being here today. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Sometime words work best, sometimes they don’t not with nightmares, never. Thrilling write this. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! You got that right, Prasad. Words don't move nightmares. Thank you for being here. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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