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Michael
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0 posted 2011-07-20 02:17 PM


Nero


I pass the faces in my mind, though not sure what’s they’re saying.
I read the concern in their eyes, not sure what it’s conveying.
I turn, in kind, from this palace of archaic conviction,
To exercise what I have won by mere right of affliction.
The memories but ridicule, their echoes seem to follow
A vision bade to glean some strength from a feeling most hollow.
Drawing the fuel of my disease, precursor to the pyre –
I watch, at length, the escapade of my Rome set to fire!

Maniacal laughter offset, as if pinned to the riddle;
From center stage, upon the dais, placing bow to fiddle…
A rivulet of musical emotion flows out through me –
Sets in one day of maddened rage the legacy that’s due me.
An emperor’s abandoned throne, lesson enough for learning:
By passions blind, dare not be led past the point of discerning.
But stand alone, while Time obscures any hope of a hero,
And count the dead dreams disinclined to this modern day Nero.

The standard set, I bow my head – will take my leave come morning…
Beyond the smoke, a buried sun arising without warning.
The gauntlet shed, I’ll not forget the path from which I’ve wandered,
The hopes undone within this broken life that I have squandered.
Though History must write my name somewhere amidst the ashes,
For all to see across the skies each time her lightning flashes;
The berth of shame, indiscreetly, will tally less than zero
In vacant eyes that still mark me a man too much like Nero.


Michael Anderson


Like one that on a lonesome road
Doth walk in fear and dread,
And having once turned round walks on,
And turns no more his head...


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1 posted 2011-07-21 01:02 AM


Ah, Michael, this is so good.  I really, truly enjoyed reading it.  Thank you for sharing.

Alison

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2 posted 2011-07-21 04:47 PM


Thanks, Alison.  This proved to be a tough write for me... like one I just couldn't polish enough to be considered a finished product.  Glad you enjoyed, even so.

Michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (07-23-2011 03:52 PM).]

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3 posted 2011-07-25 12:24 PM


Reading this prompted me to learn a bit more about Nero (math came easily, history was a subject I endured *G*). The more I learned, the more I appreciate the wonderful poem you've written but deny the comparison... 'tis a harsh judgement you've handed yourself. *S*

Or maybe I just want to hide my own violin *S* This could be mine if I could say it so well: "The hopes undone within this broken life that I have squandered."

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