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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-07-17 07:23 AM

if love is a lovelight
into our very hearts
and if I give you love
will that love light you up
and if it does light you
and you are all aglow
all my love and your light
would a love shadow show
you'd never be alone
for the love I give you
would never ever leave
and wherever you go
love's shadow will be there
that will be me you see
as you walk in love's light

©July 15, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-07-17 08:23 AM

I'm in love with this poem Jerry, it is sooo romantic! Way to go!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-17 09:23 AM

Yeah, Lori, don't know what in the world come over me. Haha Thank you for liking it, I appreciate it.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-07-17 08:05 PM

I really liked your expression, " Will a shadow show".
Love "can" be seen.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-07-17 08:19 PM

I believe love can be seen also, ebonygirl, and I thank you so much for being here.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-07-18 01:45 PM

This is so tenderly romantic, dear Jerry, very lovely indeed!

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-07-18 02:29 PM

Thank you, Margherita, for your own lovely comments.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

7 posted 2011-07-18 09:38 PM

..the true lover speaks..very nice..

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-07-18 10:26 PM

I appreciate your thoughts on my poem, Spiros, ery much.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2011-07-22 03:58 PM

I love this romantic write... absolutely beautiful!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-07-22 05:21 PM

Thanks suthern, the Muse was kind to me that day.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

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