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14th of july
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14th of july |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The night-sky ennobled of fat fires of bright bounces and indigo cabbages knighting the youth in the envious glances with reflection of the orgies and circular roofs, Surprising happiness wanted by the lights the accommodating birds invents stars, independent as darkness of flesh crossing of thunderstorms the gibes and the veils, The silence is stubborn and throws its nets on the bridges of the Loire to drawn a crowd of barges rockets slap the sky coated with secrets and fall again on the thirsty lawns, invisible wolves rush on us sometimes yellow or blue, sometimes red or green, the pack takes the city in its fangs and eats away at the pain of a happiness without echo. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Stunning imagery in this well written poem, yann. One of your best. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, Outstanding, my friend. A |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
That's my birthday! Wonderful writing. I'm keeping this for sure. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Tale that ends in tragedy, have seen invisible wolves. Fine writing, Yann. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a unique rendering of your National Day, dear Yann! You reach well beyond the festive surface! Impressive. Love, Margherita |
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