Open Poetry #47 |
Conversation with a Burchell Zebra foal and His Mama (repost inspired by Alison's Moose conversations) |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
CONVERSATION WITH A BURCHELL ZEBRA FOAL AND HIS MAMA 30 March 2002 Little zebra, I came across you in a sunny clearing in the forest you, your mama, and another. At first I stood and talked as I have always done to other zebras at other times … not knowing … not knowing what was shimmering on the edge of my universe. Perhaps it was because I spoke to all of you at first, though the third was more interested in grazing and didn’t reply at all, but Mama listened, assessing me, and somehow I felt her approval and friendship and a bonding of mothers. It was as though she felt it good manners on my part not just to charm her baby without announcing myself and my intentions. I told her of her beauty and that Burchell zebras are my favourites, and somehow she sensed that every word I said was true. I told her how exquisite her little foal was, not newborn, but just old enough to scratch his ear with his hindhoof and how adorable that was but how I was concerned that Little One may have had earmites, but then I repeated to her the voices of my education which told me that was not an issue for wild animals particularly zebras and she listened to all this with interest, twitching each ear independently in reply as you did too, listening to every word. And I turned to you and told you how clever you were and by then, Mama was totally at ease and I swelled with pride and love and gratitude for Mama’s trust and she replied with more ear twitches and placid deep gaze eyes and grazed in the summer sun, trusting, and gradually it was mostly you I was talking too, for the more I talked, the more you listened, enraptured at my voice and the tales I told, Arabian Nights for Zebra Foals, and Mama listened still but in the background as though trusting you too to know the lessons she’d taught. I told you how your stripes flowed up into your mane, and said for you to know how smart that looked to look at Mama’s mane - and she looked up from her grazing for a moment. I told you how God gave you your beautiful stripes of black and white and shadow brown in love as camouflage in dappled light to guard you from danger and you listened and twitched an ear. I told you of Flicka, my horse, and details of how horses are different and of how they are the same and you twitched your ears and held your head at times on one side as though amazed. We talked and talked and talked and the sun warmed our different backs and then the moment came … You took a few steps towards me on little zebra feet. I thought I’d died and gone to Heaven. I held my breath with bursting joy for I thought Mama would stop you … but she didn’t. She looked up … and went on grazing. I thanked her for her trust - she twitched an ear and looked at me placidly and accepting, zebra of the wild she was, then you and I resumed our conversation. I felt as though in a dream. The moments were brighter than the sun. We talked and talked and our conversation became more and more intense … and then … you took a few more steps towards me, cautious, as Mama had taught, but curious and unafraid … the pinnacle of happiness for me, for now you were but a Mama-zebra length away. Your eyes and mine held each other and we talked and talked of all things like the beauty of the summer day and the blue, blue cloudless sky. I wanted time to stop and then found I was wrong about the pinnacle of happiness for it stretched further still … for you took yet more steps. I thought my heart would explode with love and trust, but this time you had crossed the boundary of Mama’s comfort, but not her trust, for all she did was to wander a few steps slowly out of sight, - no call, no fear, no rushing between us, no lashing out at me with her tiny sharp, sharp hooves - just a few steps out of sight, knowing you would follow. But so much gratitude and love and trust had passed in that golden triangle, that I could not have wished for more. Thank you my little zebra darling and not least Mama dear for the sacred moments of bonding with a baby zebra and his Mama in a conversation that will take me back to every word and twitch of ear at every recall, and each time I return to your vast grassland hills and riverine forest home, I’ll look for you my baby zebra, and your Mama and when you’ve grown I’ll search the depths of every zebra’s eyes and talk my soul deep into his or hers in the hopes that it is you my little zebra foal. Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
How can I express how much I love this? I can't - so I will simply be silent. xoxoxo A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Pure joy to read and to experience, dear Owl! Such a wonderful time of deep connection! I do understand the preciousness of every single moment you lived and evoked in this exquisite poem. Thank you for reposting it. Btw ... I just talked to the lovely little lizard who comes out at night on my balcony. I thanked him for catching the mosquitos The lizard is very shy but he did listen it seemed for a while, I tranquilized him about Zelda, I told her how much I appreciate him. But I think it's good that he is at safe distance from her! Your friendship with animals, dear Owl, is a constant source of awe and inspiration. Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Dear Diana What a wonderful post..... :-) "I felt as though in a dream. The moments were brighter than the sun. We talked and talked and our conversation became more and more intense …" I am often in a dream state, most of my poems about nature, and the natural world are written under that influence.. And more than that, I talk to plants..and I feel they reply , not in words, but simply by their beauty.. The Zebra foal did not speak outloud, but you surely heard what it said.. Simply beautiful, is what this poem is.. not simplistic, by any means..simply, like in the rudimentary association we sometimes have with nature. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is REALLY grand-fine !! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you all very much for sharing so intimately the wonder of my experience with my darling little zebra with me. The memory of the details of the event bring the magic of the experience to me as real and current as it was then. Alison, I know how much you love and understand and know this – with or without your words. Smiles. Thank you, Margherita. We animally-people, as I describe us, for want of a better word, have a joyous blessing and bond that is beyond description. I wish that everyone could have this joy. Thank you so much for telling me about your darling little lizard friend and for making friends with him and thanking him for catching the mosquitoes and for explaining things to him so beautifully, and so every especially for warning him to stay out of Zelda-kitty’s way. I am sure he went away with the same feeling as I did after my zebra experience. I am so happy and grateful that my bond with animals resonates so beautifully in your own. I think that we could have the best of both worlds – our so-called progress – and the purity of animals and nature – if only we could only learn from animals and nature – but, generally, people think they are too clever for that. I find that sad. Thank you Ford. I know that your job involves Botany and Dendrology. I envy you. I believe that all of Nature (including us, as tainted as we are) is One and that we all communicate with each other to whatever level we want – some zero % - some close to 100%, - but very, very, very few, if any, 100% (even at a given moment) and that especially includes human to human. I love what you felt and expressed about my poem – I rate that a very high level of inter-communication, lol! Thank you, Bruce. I am glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This... is joy!!! *S* |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ruth. Glad you enjoyed it. Smiles. Hugs Owl |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You have a powerful talent to have been able to do this; feel it; speak it and write it.I am truly very in awe of you. jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Jo, for your kind words. You honour me. I have always found it so easy to communicate with animals - so much more so than with humans. Owl |
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