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Dreams in cosmic space
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Dreams in cosmic space |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Blue ripple pond by Madeleine Arnett * Dreams in cosmic space * At night I open my windows to let the draught veils wrap me in their silver shimmers while your mind eyes wash off the colours to make them transparent and keep them floating freely in a hide and seek dance where your glances become burning dots upon my lunar skin. My parted lips kiss the breeze and exhale whispers of invitation to breathe love’s secret fumes which moisten the night hours till dawn trickles the melody of Benny Goodman’s Blue skies, your key of interpretation, and a link to a past comet passage you might have missed then but which will echo throughout our common pyrotechnic future. Watch out when the Pleiades twinkle signalling star ship routes to Home for us to consider when down here becomes small and we need to fly high on trails of light steering into the Absolute. I anchor my vision in midst of the pond of our merging session memories, so you will never miss the target, as long as you center the ripples formed by either the sun or star reflections. How sweet are the extended arms of life when my brain leaks dreams in cosmic space! * |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dear Margherita, Such lovely writing. I feel brain merge in cosmic space. Truly beautiful on all levels. Thank you. xoxoox Alison |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I doubt this was written in one sitting. Exquisite poetry. Line for line fills the reader with a kaleidoscope of wondrous sights and visions amid the strains of Big Band soothing calm. A self-satisfying poem written by a talented hand. ~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully written, Margherita. "in a hide and seek dance where your glances become burning dots upon my lunar skin" Love that phraze. Michael |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
It takes a fine mind to pen a poem such as this. May your pen never run dry my friend. Your poems bring me such pleasure. Marcia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Alison, thank you for your loving comment and for merging with me in this cosmic space where we perceive All There is. Have a great week! Dear Jerry, what a gratifying comment, thank you so much! The last line of the poem is what was dancing in my mind for a couple of days and then I sat down and wrote the rest, or let's say the beginning! While I was writing Benny Goodman's Blue skies was transmitted at the radio and I felt it made a great addition to my thoughts, so it slipped quite naturally in between the lines!  Thank you so much, dear Michael, for reading and for enjoying this. Dear Marcia, you say such nice things, thank you from my heart. That's a hope I share with you and all the Poets "may our pens never run dry!". Wishing you a fulfilling creative week. Love to all, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Bautiful Margehrita - a captured moment told as only you are able. Love, Eric |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
This is a well written beauty of a poem you have here.The picture goes well with it. I truly enjoyed each line of your starlight mind. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
What a fine read to start my day, absolutely enjoyed the message and this masterful write. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very-very nice...I would have to quote the whole poem to point out the parts that I like... ;-) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh good poetess, you and your poetry are just so lovely. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, your comments bring joy. See you mid August, when I will be back from my visit to my beloved grandsons. Wishing you all a fantastic summertime! Love and joy. Margherita |
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