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as love buds |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
slow days fill with shameless repartee wandering through cloud-circles of regret two-steps take three or even more as love buds softly in its bloom welcoming image-dust shaken from steps that whisk the webs that cob the way away painting the past with sunshine divine as love buds softly in its bloom dance steps flow with brazen badinage drifting along riverbeds of compunction pirouettes pair themselves with purity as love buds softly in its bloom and the twirling twain become a single one flowering spring-sprinkle sparks…just for fun |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wow. Your imagery is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. -Trina |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
excellent piece with a nice flow when read aloud  ejoyed |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep. I agree with Rex. When read aloud the words become magical. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Trina, thank you for finding this simple write worth writing about Rex & JerryP, I am glad you enjoyed it by reading it aloud…I always do (read everything aloud), but that’s how I enjoy poetry best…thank you |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
great imagery in this wonderful poem...enjoyed it much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
An intricate, sensitive, fresh, passionate pas-de-deux! Beautiful! Nodding in agreeing with Rex, Jerry and Steaven - mot to read poetry, especially this poem, aloud, is to lose so much of it beauty and impact. Owl |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
I loved the imagery and the flow of this piece. I felt like I was dancing as I read each word. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
faithm, I am so glad that the imagery spoke to you…many kind regards Owl, ooh la la, my French is not so good…had to look up pas-de-deux and was delighted by its meaning…thank you for your comments DocAngel, that was exactly the feeling to convey that I was shooting for…glad you read, enjoyed and commented |
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