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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-01-17 04:43 PM

Prismatic....

Pragmatic
is some
“down-to-earth”
so how then does a beautiful mind
replace the prag
with pris-m’s
worth…

see the pipe
of thought in spire
see the light
through all the mire
see the raven
tear the soul
see the book
of Word in whole
see beyond the pass
of barrier
see the abyss
and find love merrier

see the man of light
gone past the aged
see the light
hear the sage’d
see the rainbow
t’ward the end

and come around
and come again…

see a crystal
in all souls
allow the dark
only but foothold
for the stepping up
and stepping on
and seeing past
to see beyond…

replace the prag
with a pris’m
and see beyond
lockdown of ism’s

Pragmatic? Oh, there’s
thought in that…
but look beyond
the hourglass
and see the world
as it conspires
to lift a thought
a tad bit higher…

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-17 05:08 PM

This is very beautifully written. The picture and poem made me feel at peace.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-01-17 05:18 PM

Yes, I got a deep breath from this one...thanks
i needed that

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2011-01-17 05:42 PM

I think I'll be pondering this question for a while

enjoyed your thoughts

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2011-01-17 05:43 PM

To live on a prismatic level, leaving pragmatism in its stale, dusty middle of the road environment. To attain the cosmic effect of the prismatic level is to live one step closer to the gods.

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

5 posted 2011-01-18 12:09 PM

Wow. You are really good at this poemnosity thingy.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2011-01-18 12:29 PM

enigmatic Karilea
and beautifully done.

how do you do it?

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

7 posted 2011-01-18 01:25 AM

great thoughts i enjoyed your poem .

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2011-01-18 02:52 AM

Very uplifting message, Karilea. Love it.
Ida

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

9 posted 2011-01-18 03:00 AM

..>>that's a beautiful song, Sunshine..!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-01-18 07:12 AM

not sure I want to spend any more time in prism but I sure enjoy your poetry pretty lady.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2011-01-18 08:01 AM

Love the positive message in this and it's a great lesson for all.

Great format too, flows well and hits home!

You da poetic gal!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

12 posted 2011-01-18 07:34 PM

Wonderful Karilea, I enjoy this and love the picture!

ooxx Marti

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