Open Poetry #47 |
needles of thelma jean |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
grandma knitted daddy a sweater with three arms said it was a place for god to reach in and give a helping hand during picking time momma used to hang it out public every spring just as a reminder that no one was helpless if someone else brings them some helpful daddy died of the cancer in his belly in june pastor said god had reached down and took him before his time, but the pickin still needed done momma cut the arm off that sweater in july sewed it up for me to wear next winter made a coat for the baby pig from that sleeve we had him as ham at christmas but didn't say grace ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-08-2011 09:00 AM).] |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This of course touches me in places you didn't even intend that it should... Thanks, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...are you eating a BLT again? Thanks lady friend. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, my, but this is incredibly intense! ... and it reminded me of my poor rabbit Ruedi whom I loved (the only one with whom I had established a friendship and who let me caress him) and who ended up on the table ... a horrible thing in my eyes that made me hate my stepfather at the time. The rabbit (Belgian Giant) had been a champion and my stepfather said he was too old then for exhibitions ... so he was still good enough to be eaten. I realize now that this wound is not healed at all! See what your haunting poem did to me? Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...well I did have a german shephard that died and I never knew what happened to him...often wondered if we ate him..thanks lady friend. |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I read this 3 times. Loved it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SlowFallAway, thank you so much for the glance dance here.. |
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