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Summer Storm |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Summer shines a sleepy green afternoon between meandering billows of white birds cast shadows then leaves flutter the light where breezes been and scents hitch a ride from bobbing blooms far and wide Summer shines a steamy green afternoon between billowing pillows of white clouds cast shadows then lightning flutters the light where breezes been the wind hitches a ride on thunder booms far and wide LGR(C)7/7/11 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loving how you paint the elements in all their beauty. So very vivid and truly gorgeous work~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Like the repetition in this poem. Favorite lines; "the wind hitches a ride / on thunder booms" You incorporated the sights, the smells and the atmosphere. Nice work, Lori. ~ Husbands are chiefly good lovers when they are betraying their wives.--Marilyn Monroe ~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those slight, almost unseen changes of a midwestern summer day... you done caught them up well in your webs of thought... |
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