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Open Poetry #47

Grand Cru Tarrying

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-07-05 02:30 PM

GRAND CRU TARRYING
5 July 2011

Burgundy kisses,
red wine sweet on heart-lips
too lush to forget.

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-07-05 10:25 PM

Oh this is heavenly, so very rich and lucious this is.

Just beautiful, Lady Owl~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-05 10:26 PM

Yep. Me too. I like it. It speaks to me.

~ It's amazing how many women a woman can be. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-07-06 01:20 PM

excellent Owl, a great treat reading

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-07-06 04:06 PM

Thank you,  Blue for your enthusiastic reply!  Smiles.

Thank you, Jerry.  Glad it spoke to you.

Thank you, Yann for your kind words.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Owl

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2011-07-09 08:28 PM

I prefer Merlot, but that would not work in this senryu...so Burgandy it is, and that makes this a romantic, sensual poem..that is perfect in form.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-07-10 02:30 AM

Giggles, Ford. I hope you enjoyed your glass of Burgundy nevertheless! Smiles.

Owl

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