Open Poetry #47 |
Your Greatest Gift to Me |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
YOUR GREATEST GIFT TO ME 1 July 2011 You are the magic of the morning, the passion of the midday sun and the solace of the night sky and of all your gifts to me, the one I treasure the most is your trust, and I will revere it with my forest-air breath, the meandering pathways of my mind, the ocean-floor depth of my soul and my spirit that touches the Heavens. Owl [This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-16-2011 09:44 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady Owl...as if written for a knight kewl romantica |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow, you are good, Dark! Yes, written for a knight. Glad you enjoyed it. Smiles. Owl |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Owl - I love your open declaration of fidelity which is something we should all adhere to more these days. In any relationship, trust is a biggee. This was crafted with heart, visual intensity and is a gift for the reader to enjoy Owl. You can trust in that too! Namyh |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is so beautiful, Owl! Trust is very important. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Namyh. Yes, the world would be a better, kinder place if there was more mutual and deserved trust. Thank you for your kind words and particular smiles at your last sentence. Thank you, Sue, for your kind words. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"You are the magic of the morning, the passion of the midday sun and the solace of the night sky..." GRAND-FINE writing!! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
you are lucky trust is a special gift you are lucky to have it in your special one ~Brad |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This is what happens when you travel Nirvana paths on the journey to Shambala. This is what you write to tell about it. This is good poetry. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bruce, for your kind words. Thank you, Brad. Lucky, maybe, but whilst someone's trust is a gift, one has to work hard, yet gently, to earn it, and it isn’t always an easy road. Thanks, Ford. Nirvana paths are sometimes rough and hidden, and Shambala not easy to find or reach - one has to be constantly working at it - but when reaching it, even for a moment, it can be worth it. Owl |
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Shortysdadd Junior Member
since 2011-06-26
Posts 39 |
very nice! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Shortysdadd Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wol, You write good. ~ the CATman Booder |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Booder-kitty-darling Thank you meeeows and purrs. I love your signature. Hugs and kisses and strokes and kitty-treats (though I know you will only admit to wanting the kitty-treats) Wol |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I really enjoyed this, Diana. Oh, by the way... Poe and Twain send their love. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Karilea. Please thank Poe and Twain very much and give them lots of cuddles and kisses from Auntie Di. Hugs Owl |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
I don't know how I missed this but I'm here now to tell you it's wonderful! You've captured the true essence of friendship/love and put it to paper in a wondorous way. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Marcia. Your replies are as warm and wonderful as your poetry - and that sure is saying some! Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This settles into my heart with a smile. *S* I love it! (and I love you! *S*) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear OwlSA, Trust is a wonderful gift. Loved the way you would revere the gift with your breath, mind and soul. Thank you, Ebonygirl |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully written, owl. Trust is something indeed to be treasured. Michael |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
glad to see this 'write' return near the top of the "P.I.P.-land" queue ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ruth. Smiling back and love you too! Thank you, Yann. Wow! Thank you, ebonygirl and welcome (once again) to the Pip pages! Yes, when somebody places their trust in me, I treat it as a fragile and precious heirloom. Thank you, Michael, for your kind words. Yes trust is indeed precious. Thank you, Bruce. Smiling. Owl |
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