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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Always When you look at me I can see the sadness In your eyes We were not meant to be That is something difficult We must learn to live with Each in our own way Others we encounter Never come nearer Than failures in comparison There is this darkness In the corner of every view However blue the day Oh moment stay Thou art so fair You and I Walking hand in hand Alone together by the sea . |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
it's hard to believe this hasn't gotten any comments yet...i think it's great even though it's sad...this poem has universal appeal  Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A simple, but beautiful compaction of thoughts and feelings... Grade A poetry...deserves a gold star Come read to me some poem, |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Delightful! Thoughtful, and insightful! Loved ever word. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Hand in hand is better than some things. A beautiful poem you have written... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely done my friend...very much reminds me of our own poet "1slick_lady" (Helen) and a photo she used a while back - her standing in the waves along the beach...a favorite of mine. j. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all "moment stay Thou art so fair" was intentional. If you do a search . . . Thanks again everyone John . |
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