Open Poetry #47 |
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Senryu |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
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. With each cup Less light More beautiful Love— The serving girl With another jar In her eyes Like golden coins— I’m a hero Ah who put this horse In front of the house And under my shoe In the back Taking a pee Three shoguns . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (06-05-2011 12:12 PM).] |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Very Nice! I like your style |
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